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Garfield_
26-06-2005, 06:06 AM
Just launched my portfolio, still work in progress but i thought id show it :D
www.impatrik.com

Note: there might be some language errors ;D

all crits and stuff are welcome
nick_t
26-06-2005, 06:23 AM
Very nice site! A little red but the overall feel is very professional. Most of the site works flawlessly and it's really smooth and functional. However, you don't capitalize your "I's" in sentences so it looks bad (not sure if you do on purpose since you capitalize I in the beginning of sentences). Oh, and you used the word "stuff" in your Services section... not good imo. Anyway, I like your work and I hope to see more from you in the future!
NonStopableForce
26-06-2005, 07:26 AM
404
www.dilorenzodesign.com

......

-NSF
Garfield_
26-06-2005, 01:06 PM
Very nice site! A little red but the overall feel is very professional. Most of the site works flawlessly and it's really smooth and functional. However, you don't capitalize your "I's" in sentences so it looks bad (not sure if you do on purpose since you capitalize I in the beginning of sentences). Oh, and you used the word "stuff" in your Services section... not good imo. Anyway, I like your work and I hope to see more from you in the future!

Yeah, im not really good at english, my mate will help me rewrite my content :stare:
and thanks for the comments ;D
Garfield_
26-06-2005, 01:07 PM
......

-NSF

I dont know what the issue about this is, several people had the same as you ;(

For those with this error, go directly to

http://www.dilorenzodesign.com/Patrik/1044336770/001_impatrik.html
Pesmerga
26-06-2005, 01:13 PM
Yeah, im not really good at english, my mate will help me rewrite my content :stare:
and thanks for the comments ;D

I thought people in Coruscant had a FAIR UNDERSTANDING OF THE LANGUAGE?!

Good site, too. Nice and flashy. Needs more women on it tho. Particularly hot ones.
Garfield_
26-06-2005, 01:23 PM
Haha no im one of those padawans in Coruscant, not learned too much english yet.
Im not human, alien guy :P
Garfield_
28-06-2005, 09:15 PM
The site is now complete.

Tell me what you think about the music etc
Shodan
28-06-2005, 09:37 PM
I don't really like the music, there is one thing, its a bit heavy for dial up users, there is a lot of flash going on.
Garfield_
28-06-2005, 10:09 PM
Yeah its a flash site remember, its not heavy :P
FictiousWill
28-06-2005, 10:36 PM
I get a red screen. Latest Firefox. It's probably me though.