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CrazyHarij
23-01-2005, 11:37 PM
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/14430652/

I'm a newbie at space imagery like this, but so far it's really fun, comments are appreciated. :)

Edcrab
23-01-2005, 11:54 PM
I like it :D

I could definitely picture that being on the front cover of a sci-fi book- it's simple enough to be effective (I mean in the sense that you see everything you need to see without getting bogged down in detail).

Steve
24-01-2005, 12:21 AM
Ooooh, purty! Can I touch it?

The Dark Elf
24-01-2005, 12:38 AM
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/14430652/

I'm a newbie at space imagery like this, but so far it's really fun, comments are appreciated. :)
Very nice, i like it :D

crabonhead
24-01-2005, 01:59 AM
makes me think of the song "space oddity" by david bowie

super cool.

Alix Mcdean
24-01-2005, 06:18 AM
Very very cool.

-Alix

Hazar
24-01-2005, 06:35 AM
Very nice :)

/me saves.

Crushenator 500
24-01-2005, 10:24 AM
Looks good, Harij :)

CREMATOR666
24-01-2005, 10:27 AM
Looks cool, keep it up! :thumbs:

StardogChampion
24-01-2005, 01:02 PM
Looks nice, kinda reminds of some of the Eve Online stuff:
http://www.eve-online.com/screenshots/collection.asp?col=24112004&n=10#sh

Especially the writing.

CrazyHarij
24-01-2005, 03:02 PM
Thanks! :D

I'm working more on experimenting with nebulae and more natural looking scenes.. I guess I'll upload if I come up with something decent.

Jimmeh
24-01-2005, 05:41 PM
Very nice Harij :D

I love it :)

Druckles
24-01-2005, 07:02 PM
Yeah, a nebula recently on Good Tutorials, Ill find the link

http://www.t-robs.com/index.php?t=tutorial&tut=Nebula%20Cloud
(there was a better one but I couldn't find it)

Nice work anyway :)

marksmanHL2 :)
24-01-2005, 07:34 PM
Very Nice :)

Ames
24-01-2005, 08:48 PM
A few suggestions:

-Needs more contrast: the star doesn't look as bright as a star should be
-Needs better textures: the planet and and nebula brushes need more variation

The planet also looks a little plain from where the beam is coming out. You could possibly add a city with lights and such around that area. Do this before sphereize (or whatever you do) the planet.

The sun's green glow doesn't look realistic. If a civilization was dying, a red giant type sun would work better.

Add more indicators of the planet dying. For all we know, the planet could be shooting a death ray at something. There could be a remnant of a space station nearby or a destroyed moon.

I hope this helps you improve on your space imagery. :D

CrazyHarij
24-01-2005, 09:20 PM
A few suggestions:

-Needs more contrast: the star doesn't look as bright as a star should be
-Needs better textures: the planet and and nebula brushes need more variation

The planet also looks a little plain from where the beam is coming out. You could possibly add a city with lights and such around that area. Do this before sphereize (or whatever you do) the planet.

The sun's green glow doesn't look realistic. If a civilization was dying, a red giant type sun would work better.

Add more indicators of the planet dying. For all we know, the planet could be shooting a death ray at something. There could be a remnant of a space station nearby or a destroyed moon.

I hope this helps you improve on your space imagery. :D

Thanks a ton, I really appreciate the C&C :D I'll do my best to correct myself according to it :)

Druckles
24-01-2005, 09:47 PM
It's dying
And what exactly is that pole? It looks like a microphone altogether...

CREMATOR666
25-01-2005, 06:52 AM
Actually, make a scene of some planet hitting down on Earth, causing a veeeeeery big explosion. That would be cool :D

Druckles
25-01-2005, 05:59 PM
What do you think Armegedon, Independence day, First Contact and all those films were about??

Sparta
26-01-2005, 03:38 AM
Its a great start.

You need more detail, and bigger explosions. And also, a shitload more colours. Adding a nebula would really add alot to the image.

Asuka
01-02-2005, 08:12 PM
Looks nice and simple.