[WIP] dm_harsh

[ComradeBadger]

This is a complete work in progress, just started, I'll tweak, change and delete a lot of this, but here it is, my current map, dm_harsh (about 2 hours work total so far)



http://resonance-mod.com/comradebadger/maps/harsh/dm_harsh0000.jpg

and

http://resonance-mod.com/comradebadger/maps/harsh/dm_harsh0001.jpg

:)

Comments n crits welcome, and bear in mind this is in it's fetal stages.

[bliink]

looking good, only thing i can spot is a lack of lighting detail :)

[MigaS_tX]

Looking nice, it reminded me of an ancient building, dunno why.
And it's a little dark, IMO. ;)

[Vegeta897]

Ohh no not another WIP map thread...

Looking good so far though... Although it's not too hard to make a corner of the room all fancy ;)

[IonizeMyAtoms]

I like WIP threads

[clarky003]

nice, just a bit dull on the light at the moment.. nothing else to say really.. keep it up :)

[ComradeBadger]

Update

Last for today:

There are goodies in among the junk!

http://resonance-mod.com/comradebadger/maps/harsh/dm_harsh0002.jpg

More stairs

http://resonance-mod.com/comradebadger/maps/harsh/dm_harsh0003.jpg

[Mechagodzilla]

I'm going to have to agree with everyone with the 'needs more variety in the lights' thing. It would help differentiate the rooms.

Looks a lot better than the last one, that's for sure. :)

[Dasparov]

looks alright, cant really tell much from the screens

[AcousticToad]

I like the lighting, its got a nice mood to it. Looking good.

[Pro[pH]et]

It looks horrible. I hate it. :p

[Braska]

Too dark for me, I'd like it a bit brighter :)

[Vegeta897]

Textures are all too similar to eachother.

[switch]

I actually like it a lot. Very dark on my monitor but fine to see on my tv (My monitor's default brightness has crapped up).


Nice clean layout makes it look like it will be more fun to play than most maps. It would probably look better getting rid of some greyness and having more variety of textures rather than just concrete.

Throw in some slightly coloured lights too that don't light up the whole room just the surrounding area so there is some nice variety in brightness.


Still its early WIP so looking very nice so far, keep working on it! :)

[Teta_Bonita]

et']It looks horrible. I hate it. :p
Dude, that's a little bit harsh!!!! har har har har har!!!
</badpun>
Seriously though, you map looks a little boring. It might have good gameplay (I'll have to play it to see), but I don't see anything visually interesting. Try sprucing it up a bit.

[sabre0001]

looks like it could be good - i agree though...spruce up the lighting a bit much - For a mod...lighting could work, for dm could get a bit annoying.

[ComradeBadger]

et']It looks horrible. I hate it. :p
It's ok, I know him.

Jimmy's just a grumpy old man :P

Update: Hammer decided to delete my map, so no more of this, sorry.

It's gone. Renamed the vmx file, even went txteditor on it's arse. Always the 'unexpected end of file found' error.