Dark Passage

[Samon]

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[Samon]

anyone...please? i have some more wrote if any ones interested

[Hazar]

Hmmm, not too bad IMHO.

Sort of is too close to what the vids show. ;)

[Sprafa]

you've got to develop it into something unique.

[Samon]

yeah its only beginning, if you want to see the next few parts?

[Urbanebula]

I say go for it!

[Samon]

thanks, but i am gonna take Sparfa's advice, its parrots the vids to much. Hell i have started again, all post it later