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Sorze
06-05-2004, 11:15 PM
Allright, I dusted off my wacom tablet for the first time in a month or two just yesterday, and this is the second night in a row I've been working on it now.

I'd like some critique, since it's not finished, and I could use some help.

Some help would really be appreciated concerning the grass (at least the grass lit up by the moon, since that will be more detailed), I have no idea how I'm going to do it. I have a second picture uploaded where I've tried doing some grass in a second layer, tell me what you think..

Play nicely!

shadow stalker
07-05-2004, 05:17 PM
I think its pretty good, although that moon is abit out of shape. And this may be a be picky, but it hink the colours you've used maybe are to common (ifn you know what i mean). But i really like it. good job :)

Glo-Boy
07-05-2004, 06:17 PM
add a bit of yellow light on the grass below the windows (very lightly) and add a very very very VERY slight orange tint to that shadow behind the house.

Sorze
07-05-2004, 07:13 PM
hmm.. Thanks for the crits, I'll be sure to try them out soon.. I'll show a updated picci mebbe later tonight...

I knew the moon was out of shape, it's just no fun adjusting the moon all the time! :P

And well, colors are the hard part ! :)

Check me out later..

Sorze
08-05-2004, 12:49 AM
small update... :)
Added som details etc.
I don't understand what would make the grass to the left of the hut orange?

Anyways, tell me what you think!