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chu
04-07-2006, 11:04 AM
A recent concept I whipped up in PS. :hmph:

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/350/lilred9oc.jpg

Finger
04-07-2006, 06:02 PM
pretty impressive, chu. My only critique is that the proportions seem very slightly off.. nose is a tad too long, a little too much upper lip, and too little chin. Good job though - nice rendering too.

Danimal
04-07-2006, 06:03 PM
My critique is basically the same as Finger's, just the porortioning.

Other than that, great job!

_Z_Ryuken
04-07-2006, 06:23 PM
I agree with the proportions being slightly off. Reason being is womens faces are usually shorter then mens.
So other than to me it doesn't look like a lady but a very pretty man with small chin (small for a man, perfect for a woman), it's a very good picture.

chu
05-07-2006, 03:00 AM
Yeah, I have a tendancy of always making the nose too long.

_Z_Ryuken
05-07-2006, 03:16 AM
Nose isn't so noticable as the forehead. If you could drop the part of her hair about an inch lower, it would make a huge difference.

ktimekiller
05-07-2006, 05:22 AM
Looks good

chu
05-07-2006, 10:52 AM
Nose isn't so noticable as the forehead. If you could drop the part of her hair about an inch lower, it would make a huge difference.

Really? I believe the hair line should be around a nose lengths above the brow.

If anyone pops into this thread again could you please post your opinions on one thing you like the most and one thing you dislike the most about it.

Shippi
05-07-2006, 11:37 AM
I like the eyes, and overall shading, but as others have said the nose/face is too long, and the forehead too high. It would look a lot better if you tweaked it a bit :)

edit: I also love the hair :D